Her curls kiss his cheek
eyes closed, lost in reverie;
tryst under starlight.
Tryst under starlight,
moonflower smiles like shy bride
as night closes in.
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Ahh. How romantic!
ReplyDeleteThanks SG :)
DeleteGreat lines Reshma! I agree with SG . Very romantic.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked my take Ushaji :)
DeleteThe repetition of the two lines sounds really romantic.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rama :) I tried to cascade the two haiku :)
DeleteThat's simply awesome!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat image. Marie
ReplyDeleteThank you Marie :) Nice to see you here :)
Deleteexcellent work ,Reshma . love your style and words like ''Her curls kiss his cheek '' , ''moonflower smiles like shy bride '' etc. so romantic !
ReplyDeleteThank you Milan for your kind words :)
DeleteThis is just too too romantic ... Loved it a lot :D
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Amrit :)
DeleteAww :-) You've weaved such a nice magical aura with these words :-) Romantic is the word!
ReplyDeleteNice to see you here Divya :) Thank you:)
DeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sarala :)
Deleteoh.. that's beautiful..:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Payal:)
Deleteit is so well expressed.It is like a perfectly designed woven fabric
ReplyDeletePleased you liked it Chowlaji :)
DeleteWow..Good one Resh.. again inspirational..
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked my verse Mad :)
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