Friday, April 18, 2014

Tryst


Her curls kiss his cheek
eyes closed, lost in reverie;
tryst under starlight.

Tryst under starlight,
 moonflower smiles like shy bride
as night closes in.
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This post is shared with  Haikuhorizons and this week's prompt is CLOSE

24 comments:

  1. Great lines Reshma! I agree with SG . Very romantic.

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  2. The repetition of the two lines sounds really romantic.

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    1. Thanks Rama :) I tried to cascade the two haiku :)

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    1. Thank you Marie :) Nice to see you here :)

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  4. excellent work ,Reshma . love your style and words like ''Her curls kiss his cheek '' , ''moonflower smiles like shy bride '' etc. so romantic !

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    1. Thank you Milan for your kind words :)

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  5. This is just too too romantic ... Loved it a lot :D

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  6. Aww :-) You've weaved such a nice magical aura with these words :-) Romantic is the word!

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    1. Nice to see you here Divya :) Thank you:)

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  7. it is so well expressed.It is like a perfectly designed woven fabric

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  8. Wow..Good one Resh.. again inspirational..

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