Thursday, April 3, 2014

Chase

Fazed mind chasing peace,
gazes into roaring sea,
 odyssey begins.
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Chasing illusions,
silly heart trips, falls in love,
bruised knee, broken heart.
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This post is shared with  Haikuhorizons and this week's prompt is TRIP

23 comments:

  1. Your set of Haiku is so beautifully-written, Reshma. Loved it! :)

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  2. Heart trips are really silly :p

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    1. Yes Amrit, sometimes they are serious too...

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  4. Bruised knees and broken hearts will mend, won't they?

    A Trip Long Ago

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    1. mend they might, but they sure leave behind scars.

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  5. Reshma it is a difficult trip,with broken hearts and bruised knees. Very well written.

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    1. Glad you liked my take Ushaji :)

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  6. Lovely haiku,Reshma.Both I loved.

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  7. Lovely! I think we all chase those illusions at some point and come up short with a broken heart and completely disenchanted. ♥

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    1. True Kathy, we all learn a few lessons the wild way. Thank you :)

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  8. I like both but especially relate to bruised knees and broken heart. Nice work.

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    1. Thank you for your encouraging words Alice :)

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  9. Bruised knee, broken heart. All I can is excellent. Thanks.

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  10. What a lovely set you have Reshma!

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