Sunday, August 11, 2013

Ocean


Beneath glimmering waves,
lie treasures, secrets of yore;
safe in her bosom.


Gold blends in silver,
sun sinks into ocean's arms;
another day ends.

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This post is shared with Haikuheights and the prompt is OCEAN.
 
Picture is from Google images

20 comments:

  1. These are gorgeous the last haiku makes me feel so peaceful =)

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  2. Light o'er the ocean
    Moon glides with her silent glow
    Starts another night

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  3. Beautifully written, the first one has so much depth... and I love the 'secrets....safe in her bosom,' part. And the second one too... its tone leaves the reader thinking... Good work!

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    1. Nature is mysterious and a great muse. Thanks Payelle for leaving your thought-prints here :)

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  4. So beautiful, Reshma

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  5. And which each ending day, a new one begins :-)

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  6. treasures are always safely hidden waiting patiently to be revealed...... love the first part most.....

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    1. Some treasures are best kept hidden too.. Thank you Sumana :)

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  7. Yeah... There might be...
    That's a divine secret! :)

    Nice thought...

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    1. Yes it might be divine,Thank you for the kind visit Satya:)

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  8. This is unique Reshma It sounds so poetic. Enchanting!!

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    1. Thanks Ushaji,your encouragement means a lot:)

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  9. I really like the line Treasures hidden... and also the gold and silver meeting to become one, it is so romantic.

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    1. Thanks Rama, there's something about the ocean-side walk that strums up romantic thoughts :)

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