Sunday, August 11, 2013

Ocean


Beneath glimmering waves,
lie treasures, secrets of yore;
safe in her bosom.


Gold blends in silver,
sun sinks into ocean's arms;
another day ends.

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This post is shared with Haikuheights and the prompt is OCEAN.
 
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20 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 12, 2013 at 12:04 AM

    These are gorgeous the last haiku makes me feel so peaceful =)

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  2. NankaAugust 12, 2013 at 3:43 AM

    Light o'er the ocean
    Moon glides with her silent glow
    Starts another night

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  3. UnknownAugust 12, 2013 at 4:10 AM

    Interesting post.

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  4. Payal RamsisariaAugust 12, 2013 at 4:55 PM

    Beautifully written, the first one has so much depth... and I love the 'secrets....safe in her bosom,' part. And the second one too... its tone leaves the reader thinking... Good work!

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    1. ReshmaAugust 12, 2013 at 5:08 PM

      Nature is mysterious and a great muse. Thanks Payelle for leaving your thought-prints here :)

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  5. AnonymousAugust 12, 2013 at 6:31 PM

    So beautiful, Reshma

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  6. Amrit SinhaAugust 12, 2013 at 8:24 PM

    And which each ending day, a new one begins :-)

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  7. Sumana RoyAugust 13, 2013 at 4:59 AM


    treasures are always safely hidden waiting patiently to be revealed...... love the first part most.....

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    1. ReshmaAugust 13, 2013 at 12:21 PM

      Some treasures are best kept hidden too.. Thank you Sumana :)

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  8. LocomenteAugust 13, 2013 at 7:30 AM

    Yeah... There might be...
    That's a divine secret! :)

    Nice thought...

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    1. ReshmaAugust 13, 2013 at 12:23 PM

      Yes it might be divine,Thank you for the kind visit Satya:)

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  9. UnknownAugust 13, 2013 at 7:44 AM

    This is unique Reshma It sounds so poetic. Enchanting!!

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    1. ReshmaAugust 13, 2013 at 12:23 PM

      Thanks Ushaji,your encouragement means a lot:)

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  10. Rama AnanthAugust 14, 2013 at 2:28 AM

    I really like the line Treasures hidden... and also the gold and silver meeting to become one, it is so romantic.

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    1. ReshmaAugust 14, 2013 at 4:06 PM

      Thanks Rama, there's something about the ocean-side walk that strums up romantic thoughts :)

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