Wednesday, July 3, 2013

Marked!!


Deep down we all wish
world takes note of the real us-
unique impression.
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 Marking your presence,
clockwork life welcomes you in-
logging in to work.
 

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This post is shared with Haikuheights and the prompt is FINGERPRINT

Pictures are from Google images





19 comments:

  1. Our fingerprints make us unique and one-of-a-kind. I like your take on this. Refreshing!

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    1. Thanks TWG, happy to see you again:)

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  2. We all want the world to know the real us but it does not happens so. Nice Haiku. Colourful images.

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    1. Thanks Kalpana:) we all love it when we are noticed and appreciated don't we?

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  3. The second Haiku is very unique.

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  4. Wow loved both...but first one was awesome!!

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    1. Welcome to my blog JM, glad you liked my offerings :)

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  5. I love that unique take on the prompt, I never would have thought of the second one. And the first one is wonderful and very true!

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    1. Thanks Candice :) Having started my days like that for a few years, I thought of it right away :)

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  6. Love the colored impressions!!...and the finger printing machine to log in should make me feel like a criminal!! :) A newer version of the old time punching machine!!

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    1. Thanks Nanka :) The finger scan felt creepy initially but then got used to it, like we had a choice :P

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  7. Nice, refreshing and colorful take on the prompt...loved both of them...

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    1. Thanks Odyzz:) Glad to see you here after a loong time :)

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  8. Wonderfully unique takes, Reshma. The first one is very profound

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    1. Thank you Celestine, always a pleasure to know your thoughts :)

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  9. Love your take on finger prints! First one is so very profound! You are a pro in saying so much in few words! :)

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    1. Glad you liked my Haiku, You are very generous with your compliments Shilpa:) I really admire your casual and matter-of-fact writing about just about anything under the sun.

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