Deep down we all wish
world takes note of the real us-
unique impression.
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Marking your presence,
clockwork life welcomes you in-
logging in to work.
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Our fingerprints make us unique and one-of-a-kind. I like your take on this. Refreshing!
ReplyDeleteThanks TWG, happy to see you again:)
DeleteWe all want the world to know the real us but it does not happens so. Nice Haiku. Colourful images.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kalpana:) we all love it when we are noticed and appreciated don't we?
DeleteThe second Haiku is very unique.
ReplyDeleteWow loved both...but first one was awesome!!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog JM, glad you liked my offerings :)
DeleteI love that unique take on the prompt, I never would have thought of the second one. And the first one is wonderful and very true!
ReplyDeleteThanks Candice :) Having started my days like that for a few years, I thought of it right away :)
DeleteLove the colored impressions!!...and the finger printing machine to log in should make me feel like a criminal!! :) A newer version of the old time punching machine!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nanka :) The finger scan felt creepy initially but then got used to it, like we had a choice :P
DeleteNice, refreshing and colorful take on the prompt...loved both of them...
ReplyDeleteThanks Odyzz:) Glad to see you here after a loong time :)
DeleteWonderfully unique takes, Reshma. The first one is very profound
ReplyDeleteThank you Celestine, always a pleasure to know your thoughts :)
Deletereally nice! loved 2nd one! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anjali :)
DeleteLove your take on finger prints! First one is so very profound! You are a pro in saying so much in few words! :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked my Haiku, You are very generous with your compliments Shilpa:) I really admire your casual and matter-of-fact writing about just about anything under the sun.
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