Enchanted forest,
bejeweled nature sparkles -
golden beads of light.
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Luminous soft grass
beckons the dreamer to stroll;
floating radiance.
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Magical haiku love the feeling you captured
ReplyDelete"golden beads of light" especially like.
ReplyDeleteFireflies do feel like golden beads on a dark night, don't they?
DeleteEnchanted and bejewelled it is indeed!! Nicely expressed!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nanka, having never seen them in real life, fireflies enchant me :)
Delete"Floating radiance" how beautiful..You certainly caught enchantment in this piece.
ReplyDeleteThanks Susie:) I feel fireflies are to night what butterflies are to the day...
DeleteLovely...thank you
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Siggi
Thank you Siggi:)
DeleteBoth pure magic!
ReplyDeleteYour pictures and words complement each other so well! Love the way you weave words and pics together!
ReplyDeleteThank you Shilpa, glad you like my attempts :)
DeleteLoved it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rama:)
Deletenicely written :) beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Anjali :)
DeleteOh Reshma, these are exquisite
ReplyDeleteYou are generous as always Celestine :)
DeleteYes all seems enchHaiku Heights Fireflyanted when the fireflies are about! Lovely imagery!
ReplyDeleteThank you wabi, yes fireflies have a magical charm about them:)
DeleteHi Reshma. This is a very captivating Haiku. The imagery is 'brightening'. Loved it!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Ma'am :)
DeleteThis almost sounds like a beautiful fairy tale :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Amrit:)
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