Gathered drop by drop
sweet molten gold collection-
nectar laden home.
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Weigh wants against needs-
vain attempt to measure life;
scales seldom balance.
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Very nice - both!
ReplyDeleteGlad you like my attempts, Thank you :)
DeleteGreat Haiku both. The imagery is perfect,Reshma.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ushaji :)
DeleteEspecially like the first.
ReplyDeleteThank you Latonya :)
DeleteThe nectar gatherers know what measure is important!
ReplyDeleteFive Measures
Oh yes, they know a great many things unlike us :)
DeleteBeautiful, yet again! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Shilpa :)
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