Old stories, new names;
time breezes, rewriting fates-
old sand, new landscape.
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Stars cast envious glares-
sand and sea entwined in love,
saga beyond time.
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No dirt seen, pure fun ;
tiny hands play, hold, shape, build-
piles of golden dreams.
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Out of town for a couple of days, will come back and read all your delightful posts, thank you for visiting :)
ReplyDeleteThese are absolutely wonderful =)
ReplyDeleteThanks Candice :) will drop by your post soon...
DeleteInnocent dreams built in sand ... lovely !!!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked my attempt Amrit :)
DeleteStories shift with the sand!
ReplyDeleteSand Squiggles
Yes Mark, sometimes they drastically alter lives...Thank you for dropping by :)
DeleteWonderfully weaved stories in sand!
ReplyDeleteThanks Shilpa
DeleteNice set! I so liked the first one:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Tarang:)
DeleteA beautiful bouquet of Haiku. I loved the first one very much.
ReplyDeleteThanks you for your generous comments Ushaji:)
DeleteVery nicely written verse.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ann, happy to have you here :)
Deleteall of them are beautiful.
ReplyDeleteOld sand new landscape. loved it.
Thanks Kalpana :)
Deletewonderfully composed
ReplyDeleteThank you for dropping by Celestine, will hop over your space soon :)
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