Tuesday, January 22, 2013

Song of dusk


"Come ye traveller,
rest awhile fore you fly again",
the young night sang.

The young night sang
"never give up your heart's pursuit,
fill your heart with dreams "

"Fill your heart with dreams, 
while I soothe your aching limbs;
fore you fly away..."




This post is inspired by the prompt on Haikuheights and this week's prompt is DUSK

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10 comments:

  1. Sanjana January 22, 2013 at 8:49 PM

    This is more of a poem than haiku..I enjoyed the idea of the night singing to us..good thought!


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    1. ReshmaJanuary 23, 2013 at 10:08 AM

      Thanks Sanjana, glad you liked it. I'm new to Haiku way of writing, since many veterans have pointed out this is not much of a Haiku, I have now marked this as a poem :)

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    2. ReshmaJanuary 23, 2013 at 10:52 AM

      Have linked a Haiku now, please leave your thoughts on it :)

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  2. Eliz FrankJanuary 22, 2013 at 11:24 PM

    Enjoyed your poem... Looking forward to your haiku! :-)
    Eliz

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  3. Amrit SinhaJanuary 23, 2013 at 5:28 AM

    These are very relaxing words ... beautiful !!!

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 23, 2013 at 9:23 AM

    Loved the line "the young night sang" beautiful even if it is not truly a haiku?

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    1. ReshmaJanuary 23, 2013 at 10:10 AM

      Glad you loved it:) Will try for a Haiku the next time around :)

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