Amidst pleasant shade and colorful blossoms,
as we awkwardly sauntered along;
in idle and friendly banter we indulged
trying to judge ourselves thoroughly,
gauge if we were indeed meant to be.
Nagging thoughts went up in smoke
of our pets and peeves as we spoke.
The pace at which our hearts raced
when passionately we embraced,
The earnest promises we made
will remain forever a serenade
as our love for one another we divulged.
With twinkle-eyed smiles I wish life-long
to celebrate with you innumerable springs and autumns...
This post is shared with 3WW and the words for this week are Idle, Nagging & Pace.
Picture is from Google images
how truly beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sheilagh.
DeleteThat is so very beautiful! Simply loved it and imagined it too, as I read! :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Shilpa :)
DeleteWhat a truly heartfelt love poem! I really enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the appreciation Mary :)
DeleteWow! I loved this this walk ,Reshma...beautiful.. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Odyzz, I loved it too and it'll remain for me a walk to remember forever:)
DeleteA beautiful walk! I can see why you would want to remember this walk!
ReplyDeleteThank you Robyn :) moments like these make life a beautiful dream
DeleteIn love, springs and autumns become the same, wee embrace both with open arms.
ReplyDeleteadorable!
That's true Meenakshi:) life becomes more meaningful..
DeleteTruly....what a beautiful walk!! And filled with love.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the kind words Mary :)
DeleteYou are truly a fine poet. :-)
ReplyDeleteThat's high praise coming from you Eliz. Thank you, I hope my writing lives up to your expectations
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