Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Dusk

Pause awhile, reflect
joys, fears layered within- 
dusk plucks soul-string.



This post is shared with  Haikuheights and this week's prompt is DUSK

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22 comments:

  1. Eliz FrankJanuary 23, 2013 at 11:45 AM

    This is a beautiful haiku and I love your blog colors too... warm and inviting. ;-)
    Eliz

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  2. Amrit SinhaJanuary 23, 2013 at 11:53 AM

    "dusk plucks soul-string" - lovely haiku !!!

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  3. Eliz FrankJanuary 23, 2013 at 11:54 AM

    Okay from a technical standpoint, a haiku could be 5 7 5 or 3 5 3 syllables. The second and third lines could use one more syllable each... For example:
    joys, fears layered within me - 7
    dusk plucks my soul-string. - 5
    I reread the comment you left me and realized I should look at this again. Hope this helped. Keep on writing... Haiku is addictive. :-)
    Eliz

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    1. ReshmaJanuary 23, 2013 at 12:00 PM

      Thank you for the kind review Eliz. I sincerely appreciate your help :)

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  4. Judith WesterfieldJanuary 23, 2013 at 6:54 PM

    No matter how many syllables your poetry is lovely. And thanks for the great comment you left on My Liberty & Justice for All post -- You are smack dab on the money.

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    1. ReshmaJanuary 23, 2013 at 6:59 PM

      Thank you for the encouraging words Judith:)

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 23, 2013 at 6:56 PM

    "dusk plucked soul string" This is delightful image. Musical in addition to visual. Good work. Keep writing.
    Alice

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    1. ReshmaJanuary 23, 2013 at 7:03 PM

      Thank you for dropping by, your appreciation sure means a lot:)

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  6. Woman'n'BeyondJanuary 23, 2013 at 7:38 PM

    very soulful! prodding me for introspection.

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    1. ReshmaJanuary 24, 2013 at 10:14 AM

      Happy to have provided food for your thought Meenakshi.

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  7. DivyaJanuary 23, 2013 at 10:34 PM

    Wow! Beautiful lines :)

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  8. UnknownJanuary 24, 2013 at 5:04 AM

    lovely, reflective

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  9. Magical Mystical TeacherJanuary 24, 2013 at 3:09 PM

    Dusk certainly plucks at my soul!

    Dusk in the Graveyard

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    1. ReshmaJanuary 24, 2013 at 4:07 PM

      Nice to know it evokes similar feelings, thank you Teacher for dropping by:)

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  10. odyzzJanuary 28, 2013 at 6:52 AM

    dusk plucks soul-string- Wow !! mesmerizing..

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  11. Shilpa GargJanuary 29, 2013 at 8:33 AM

    Beautiful, yet again!

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