Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Dusk

Pause awhile, reflect
joys, fears layered within- 
dusk plucks soul-string.



This post is shared with  Haikuheights and this week's prompt is DUSK

Picture is  from Google images

22 comments:

  1. This is a beautiful haiku and I love your blog colors too... warm and inviting. ;-)
    Eliz

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    1. You made my day Eliz, glad you liked it :)

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  2. "dusk plucks soul-string" - lovely haiku !!!

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  3. Okay from a technical standpoint, a haiku could be 5 7 5 or 3 5 3 syllables. The second and third lines could use one more syllable each... For example:
    joys, fears layered within me - 7
    dusk plucks my soul-string. - 5
    I reread the comment you left me and realized I should look at this again. Hope this helped. Keep on writing... Haiku is addictive. :-)
    Eliz

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    1. Thank you for the kind review Eliz. I sincerely appreciate your help :)

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  4. No matter how many syllables your poetry is lovely. And thanks for the great comment you left on My Liberty & Justice for All post -- You are smack dab on the money.

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    1. Thank you for the encouraging words Judith:)

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  5. "dusk plucked soul string" This is delightful image. Musical in addition to visual. Good work. Keep writing.
    Alice

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    1. Thank you for dropping by, your appreciation sure means a lot:)

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  6. very soulful! prodding me for introspection.

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    1. Happy to have provided food for your thought Meenakshi.

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    1. thank you Jennifer, glad you liked it.

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    1. Nice to know it evokes similar feelings, thank you Teacher for dropping by:)

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  9. dusk plucks soul-string- Wow !! mesmerizing..

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