Monday, January 28, 2013

Call for deliverance



Bound by my frailties
I flap wings of endless dreams
can I ever fly?



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Rumbling in the dark,
uneasy mind awakened-
antacid rescues.




This post is shared with  Haikuheights and this week's prompt is RESCUE


Pictures are  from Google images

12 comments:

  1. Careful, like many apparent rescues, antacids can cause worse rebound! :-)

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    1. Oh yes, its just for temporary relief. Thank you Sabio:)

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  2. The first one is awesome and the picture is so apt. We all need deliverance but the time is running out.

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    1. Very true Meenakshi, time never waits for anyone.

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  3. Loved the first one! Very profound!

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  4. I loved the second one. I like the bounce outside of traditional themes. I caught my attention. The picture give me an anxious feeling. WHo put the butterfly in there and how will he get out?;-)

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  5. Glad you liked them Alice... the butterfly is a metaphor for us when we trap ourselves in our own illusions feeling all caught up and confused.

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  6. I love the delicate way you use language in your haiku... so, so beautiful. TY! :-)
    Eliz

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    1. Thank you for the kind words Eliz :)

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