Bound by my frailties
I flap wings of endless dreams
can I ever fly?
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Rumbling in the dark,
uneasy mind awakened-
antacid rescues.
This post is shared with Haikuheights and this week's prompt is RESCUE
Pictures are from Google images
Careful, like many apparent rescues, antacids can cause worse rebound! :-)
ReplyDeleteOh yes, its just for temporary relief. Thank you Sabio:)
DeleteThe first one is awesome and the picture is so apt. We all need deliverance but the time is running out.
ReplyDeleteVery true Meenakshi, time never waits for anyone.
Deleteantacid helps always :-)
ReplyDeleteIt sure does GS:)
DeleteLoved the first one! Very profound!
ReplyDeleteThanks Shilpa :)
DeleteI loved the second one. I like the bounce outside of traditional themes. I caught my attention. The picture give me an anxious feeling. WHo put the butterfly in there and how will he get out?;-)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked them Alice... the butterfly is a metaphor for us when we trap ourselves in our own illusions feeling all caught up and confused.
ReplyDeleteI love the delicate way you use language in your haiku... so, so beautiful. TY! :-)
ReplyDeleteEliz
Thank you for the kind words Eliz :)
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