Both Haiku are superb! The joy of watching children playing together is so fulfilling and rings of Jalebis are yummy,yummy.
Thank you for your kind words Ushaji, pleased you liked my take :)
Jalebis are soooo tempting
Thank you Chowlaji, Jalebis are my favorite sweets :)
brilliant haiku both of them! I especially liked the opening line! :)
Glad you liked it Apurva :0
The second one is so appetizing.
It is hard to resist sweet temptations :)
Thanks Celestine :)
Thanks Judith :)
Ahh. Send me some of those jalebis.
Sure SG, let me get some first :)
wow loving both!!! haiku of innocence!! :)
Thank you Anjali :)
These are both good...I am going to have to find out what jalebis is...looks like noodles!
Glad you liked my take Rallentanda :) Jalebi is a deep-fried sweet dish that is soaked in sugar syrup.
while the first one makes me nostalgic, the second one s makin my mouth water! good ones :)
Thank you for dropping by Swathi :) Glad you liked my take :)
You brought back the memories of my maternal grandma :)Beautiful post...
Thank you for the kind words Nupur, hope to see more of you :)
Lovely and sweet, respectively!! I am yearning for the jalebis now! :)
Thank you Shilpa, I too want some Jalebis :D
Why did you write about jalebi? I need a few now :-/
I have been wanting to lay my hands on Jalebis for quite a while now, and this prompt just gave me the excuse to think more about them :P
love the second one ! indigenous !
Thanks Milan, glad you enjoyed my take :)
The laughter of children is ringing in my heart!Fertility’s Shadow Ring
Children's laughter has magical powers, I always yearn for more of it :)
OMG, I had to laugh at the second one! You are a genius!! Never would have thought of spaghettios! Brilliant!
Thank you for your kind words Kathy, the second haiku is about a delicacy from India called Jalebi which resembles a fried pretzel dipped in sugar syrup, sinfully delicious :)
Lovely haiku,both.First one is for me favourite since jalebis don't water my mouth.
Thanks Sarala :) Children's laughter is sweeter than any Jalebi in the world :)
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