Whiz, whoosh, zip or zoom,
life rushes by in a blur
needles of time fly.
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Wings clipped and hopes caged,
trapped by illusions, man craves-
flights of fantasy.
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Wow Reshma I loved the alliteration in the first one. Both are good.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ushaji :) Pleased you liked my takes :)
DeleteA beautiful flow, Reshma :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Celestine :)
DeleteThe needles of time rotate at their pace but our life is a blur of zip zap and zoom.Perfectly written.
ReplyDeleteYou described my thoughts perfectly Kalpana :) thank you :)
DeleteExpressed very nicely.
ReplyDeleteThanks SG, for breezing by despite your busy schedule :)
DeleteSadly life does seem to rush by in a blur! Too bad we can't slow it down or maybe slow ourselves down! :)
ReplyDeleteVery true Wabisabi, not all things can be controlled. Pleased that you dropped by :)
Deleteunique ! i like the illusion created so simply yet so realistically
ReplyDeleteThank you for the kind words Milan :)
DeleteEvery word is an expression in itself
ReplyDeleteThank you Chowlaji, glad you liked my take :)
DeleteWow, I wish I could write haikus. Well written
ReplyDeleteThanks Sabeeha, I'm still learning, you can try it out too, I'm sure you'll pick it up soon :)
Deletegreat images sketched here Reshma...i specially like those needles of time...wow...
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana :)
Deletebrilliant haiku! loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Apurva :)
Deletebeautiful!!! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anjali :)
DeleteYour words create a vivid imagery! Lovely ones, Reshma!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Shilpa :)
DeleteAnd who can stop the needles of time?
ReplyDeleteFly and Shadows
I wish I could say "Me" :P
DeleteSo true .... we can never slow the flight :-)
ReplyDeleteBut we can always dream of it ;)
DeleteLove the brilliant imagery you created here. Well done! ♥
ReplyDeleteThank you Kathy, glad you enjoyed reading my take :)
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