Trinkets lose their sheen,
flowers wither, time trudges,
scent of love lingers.
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Man ambles bee-like,
seeking elusive quiet,
loud ego buzzing
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This post is shared with Haikuhorizons and this week's prompt is DRIFT
I loved the first one.. The words used and the truth it speaks!
ReplyDeleteThanks Satya :)
DeleteReshma, both are good, but the first one is unique.!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind encouragement Ushaji :)
DeleteI agree with Usha. Wonderful set!
ReplyDeleteThank you Celestine :)
DeleteExcellent.
ReplyDeleteThanks SG :)
DeleteLovely haiku!
ReplyDeleteThank you Englepappa, welcome to my blog :)
DeleteI agree.. first one was just lovely!
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed my take Sabeeha :)
Deletebewitching ! some things are never meant to be changed Reshma ! /i am talking about the first one ! the second one has all the essence of a clasic haiku !
ReplyDeleteI agree wit you Milan, the bittersweet feeling of love are just meant to be. Please you enjoyed my takes :)
DeleteExcellent.I like the second one
ReplyDeleteThank you Chowlaji :)
DeleteA beautiful one
ReplyDeleteThanks Sanjay, welcome to my blog :)
DeleteEgo spoils everything ... lovely set :-)
ReplyDeleteIt sure does, glad you enjoyed my set Amrit :)
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