Wednesday, May 28, 2014

Drift


Trinkets lose their sheen,
flowers wither, time trudges,
scent of love lingers.
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Man ambles bee-like,
seeking elusive quiet,
loud ego buzzing
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This post is shared with Haikuhorizons and this week's prompt is DRIFT






20 comments:

  1. I loved the first one.. The words used and the truth it speaks!

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  2. Reshma, both are good, but the first one is unique.!

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    1. Thank you for your kind encouragement Ushaji :)

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  3. I agree with Usha. Wonderful set!

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    1. Thank you Englepappa, welcome to my blog :)

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  5. I agree.. first one was just lovely!

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    1. Glad you enjoyed my take Sabeeha :)

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  6. bewitching ! some things are never meant to be changed Reshma ! /i am talking about the first one ! the second one has all the essence of a clasic haiku !

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    1. I agree wit you Milan, the bittersweet feeling of love are just meant to be. Please you enjoyed my takes :)

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  7. Excellent.I like the second one

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    1. Thanks Sanjay, welcome to my blog :)

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  9. Ego spoils everything ... lovely set :-)

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    1. It sure does, glad you enjoyed my set Amrit :)

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