Beautiful Haiku. Hope these camels cross the desert within 2 weeks because they can survive without water for 2 weeks only. (and 30 days without food.)
I'm enduring some of those "puffs of dust" here in the Sonoran Desert this morning. Well, they are more like howling blasts! Not exactly as pleasant as the description you present!
Wow! This is so beautifully written. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words Balqis :)
Delete"through sea of golden gravel" oh yes!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked my take Cheryl :)
DeleteBeautiful Haiku. Hope these camels cross the desert within 2 weeks because they can survive without water for 2 weeks only. (and 30 days without food.)
ReplyDeleteThanks SG. I hope they find some water source along the way, wasn't aware of their long fasting abilities.
DeleteBeautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anjali :)
DeleteBrilliantly metaphorical ... love it :-)
ReplyDeletePleased you loved it Amrit :)
DeleteOw Beautiful with depth.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Celestine :)
DeleteI'm enduring some of those "puffs of dust" here in the Sonoran Desert this morning. Well, they are more like howling blasts! Not exactly as pleasant as the description you present!
ReplyDeleteCemetery Sand & Red
Yes, sandstorms leave behind a unpleasant trail MMT. I merely meant to say that shifting sands are much like ever-changing ways of life.
DeleteLovely. The sands of time are always shifting. Great descriptions. ♥
ReplyDeleteYes Kathy, just like our thoughts, sands of time keep shifting. Glad you enjoyed my take :)
DeleteOne beats the other.Excellent.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind appreciation Sarala :)
Deletelove your metaphor ! awesome !
ReplyDeleteThanks Milan :)
DeleteBeautiful.. Loved your first one !!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jyotsna:)
Deletedeep thoughts. very nice :)
ReplyDeletethank you very much Payal :)
DeleteLike the shift from golden gravel to golden dust.
ReplyDeleteThanks Gemma :)
DeleteVery nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks Leona, pleased you dropped by :)
Deletevery deep and meaningful thought.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ushaji, nice to see you here after a long time :)
DeleteEver changing is the concept that is so true. Nothing remains same.
ReplyDeleteYes Rama, that is the way of the world.
Delete'puff of golden dust.'...love the image Reshma...like how you've captivated the flow of life ...
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana :)
DeleteI like the vision of golden dust. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteHappy to see you drop by Alice :) Just blew a few flakes of fairy dust your way, get well soon friend!!
DeleteLovely set, especially the first one!!:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Tarang:)
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