Dreary piece of rock;
kiss of metal carves it to life-
sculpted poetry.
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Barren looking rock;
chisel sings, hammer dances-
hidden gems unearthed.
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This post is shared with Haikuheights and the prompt is STONE
Two diverse thoughts... beautifully share the secrets in stone! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Shilpa :)Stones speak even in their silence...
Deletenice one reshma :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anjali :)
DeleteA couple of gems unearthed with these words too :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you for the encouragement Amrit :)
DeleteFantastic both of them!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteVery beauttifully described. Both are unique.
ReplyDeleteThank you ma'am :)
Delete"sculpted poetry"I just love that line! :(
ReplyDeleteBrick or Stone
I feel every stone has a story to tell, if only we could listen and understand :)
DeleteTwo fine haiku!! Love the thoughts and idea that carved it!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Nanka, glad you like them :)
DeleteOh, these are beautiful, Reshma. I especially love the first one
ReplyDeleteYou are generous in your praise as always Celestine, thank you :)
DeleteWhat treasures like gold and crystals hide in barren looking rock:) Tigerbrite
ReplyDeleteNature camouflages well, doesn't she?
Deleteespecially like the first.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteVery nice.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed both!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked my attempts :)
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