Friday, December 28, 2012

Snow


Along frosty path,
as silver dreams float above,
heart seeks warmth in love.


This post is shared with Haikuheights and this week's prompt is snow.

Picture is from Google images

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11 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 28, 2012 at 1:43 PM

    Oh I absolutely love this verse, it is my favourite on this theme x and the photo is beautiful x

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  2. AnonymousDecember 28, 2012 at 3:30 PM

    Beautiful, Reshma

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  3. odyzzDecember 29, 2012 at 3:43 AM

    pleasant and hopeful..nicely written..
    Cheers
    Happy Christmas week and have a wonderful Year ahead.
    All smiles

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    1. ReshmaDecember 29, 2012 at 9:43 AM

      thank you for your lovely wishes Odyzz.
      Have a fantastic year ahead :)

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  4. AnonymousDecember 29, 2012 at 9:10 AM

    great work - but have you considered re-ordering to 5-7-5
    in my humble opinion this would add just a little to this already fabulous verse

    respectfully WN

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    1. ReshmaDecember 29, 2012 at 9:46 AM

      thank you for the appreciation WN. Did try tinkering around but somehow couldn't... So ended up posting it as it is. Will keep that in mind in future :)

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  5. Amrit SinhaDecember 29, 2012 at 10:29 AM

    Silver dreams ... now that's what you call real beauty :-)

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    1. ReshmaDecember 29, 2012 at 2:14 PM

      Nature is beautiful in all her forms...Thank you Green Speck :)

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  6. Shilpa GargJanuary 1, 2013 at 1:25 AM

    That's a good one too!

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