Thursday, December 27, 2012

Dream-train

55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty five words excluding the title.


 

 Waiting to board the train, Susan smiled thinking of all those tedious hours of training under her coach's watchful eyes. It was designed to make her limber and stronger. Soon she would be in the national team. Little did she know a bomb was aboard too, ticking away waiting to detonate dozens of such dreams...


This post is shared with 3WW and the words for this week are Detonate, Limber & Tedious.

Picture is from Google images

4 comments:

  1. your words have successfully created the whole scene to imagine in just few lines

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    1. Thank you for the appreciation Vandana.Keep visiting.

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  2. Aah!! That's bad!! However a nice 55er!

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    1. Yeah with a word like detonate in the prompt,couldn't really think of anything happy... Glad you liked it though :)

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