Tuesday, February 4, 2014

Braving the tide.


Like rain from the skies above,
trickling along like creeks,
depth of parched earth as it seeks;
priceless jewels glistened a while,
fore running dry on her cheeks,
leaving behind salty streaks...

She had showered pristine love
seeking delight not dejection
yet met apathy not affection;
False was her fervor, fake her smile
mask of ebullience she wore with poise,
life was a blend of heart-breaks and joys...

Her deepest feelings poured out,
her dreams, desires and doubts;
pearls of her soul, it's semblance,
gems they were of her essence.
Her heart lightened, she sighed,
she was ready to brave the tide...



Picture is  from Google images





21 comments:

  1. I read the poem. I like it. But I do not know the meaning of the title "Braving the tide". I did not go to Harvard.

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    1. Harvard huh? Neither did I SG :P We are in the same boat...
      "Braving the tide" is more of a sailor's expression to describe sailing in the rough water at high tide when waves lash out. So it means facing the challenges of life.

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  2. Beautiful poem. I guess one can relate to it at some point of life.

    Btw, Who is your favorite poet?

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    1. Thanks Rahmath, actually I haven't read a lot of poems as such...From what I read during my school days, I can say I like Wordsworth's poems about Nature, R L Stevenson, H.W Longfellow though I have not read a lot of their poems... I have read more prose than poetry.

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  3. Such a sweet poem..Its message of optimism and inspiration is very encouraging.

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    1. Thank you for your kind encouragement Ushaji :)

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  4. Lovely, so inspiring and so beautifully worded!!

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  5. This is beautiful...really brilliant. ♥

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  6. A very uplifting poem ... I love your poems, they are so soothing and feel good to the mind :-)

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    1. Coming from a brilliant poet like you Amrit, these words make me real happy, am on cloud nine now :) Thank you :)

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  7. "Braving the tide" , I just love the title, and yes we are prepared to take the challenges that life throws at us, I would say "Give me more"!

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    1. Thanks Rama, the title is inspired by Amrit's poem(http://livinglifegreenspeck.blogspot.com/2014/01/braving-tide.html) that stayed on my mind... Yes, we need the "Yes, I can and I will" attitude to face the wonderful challenges that life decides to beautify our lives with.

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  8. life was a blend of heart-breaks and joys...
    How true Reshma!
    loved your soulful poem.

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