When did this all start
this heady rush of feelings so stout
rippling through my heart
Waves of hope peeping out in part,
hidden behind veils of doubt
when did this all start
Time tries hard to thwart
cascades of joy that pour out,
rippling through my heart
Gushes of pain ink life's chart
even as peace surges in to ease bout,
when did this all start
Like a colorful work of art,
emotions seem to swirl about
rippling through my heart
To revel in the ride and steer the cart;
I just need to find out -
when did this all start
rippling through my heart.
P.S - This poem is my first attempt at Villanelle. A Villanelle is a nineteen-line poem consisting of a very specific rhyming scheme: aba aba aba aba aba abaa. The first and the third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating order throughout the poem, and appear together in the last couplet (last two lines).
Picture is from Google images
Nice poem. Never hard of Villanelle until now. Thanks for introducing this.
ReplyDeleteThanks SG, I too came across this recently.
DeleteThat is a b'ful Villanelle! I love writing these poems too :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ankita, glad you enjoyed my take :) Will take a look at your blog soon
DeleteNice to read such rhyming poems.Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words Sarala.
DeleteBeautiful poem. Thanks for introducing us to Villanelle.
ReplyDeleteHow have you been?
I used to come and check a few times long time back, didn't see any updates, so I stopped. I have also stopped blogging, pure laziness.
thank you so much Rama :) I have been blessed, motherhood keeping me busy all day and night for more than a year now :) I hope to resume blogging, currently in the middle of a move from Portland to Boston, so lots to blog but no time.
DeleteThis is an interesting poetic form. Loved it :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Amrit, glad you liked it :)
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