Tuesday, June 17, 2014

Open

Open road beckons,
summer breeze caresses face,
open top driving.
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Racing against time,
case of so near yet so far;
open book exams.
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This post is shared with Haikuhorizons and this week's prompt is OPEN


26 comments:

  1. Luv the carefree mood of the first one. Tthanks for stopping at my blog

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    1. Glad you enjoyed my take Gillena, thank you for dropping by :)

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  2. Open Top Driving in this summer. Ahh. Heavan.

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    1. So true Rajan :) In California, it is almost year round blessing, isn't it?

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  3. lovely haiku! especially loved the second one!...can totally relate to it :)

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    1. Thanks Apurva, if exams were scary then open book exams were nightmares :D

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  4. I like these so much; fun and carefree and the second one took me down memory lane.

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    1. Happy to hear you enjoyed my Haiku ride Celestine :)

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  5. I love both of your haiku! The first for the exhilaration you captured and the second for the frantic edge. Well done! ♥

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    1. Thank you for your kind encouragement Kathy :)

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  6. open top driving ! thats a nostalgic feeling to me ! you have painted a fantastic picture Reshma !

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    1. Thank you Milan, glad you liked my take :)

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  7. Memories of college - so sweet! Loving these haiku. :)

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    1. Thank you for your kind words :)

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  8. Loved it! There's truth in your Haiku, Reshma. Beautifully written! :)

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    1. Thank you for your kind words Balqis :)

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  9. Open book exams ... seems simple but always a challenge :p

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    1. You are so right Amrit, am so glad I dont have to face any more of them :)

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  10. nicely done haiku.
    I always struggle to attract myself to book when time presses for exam and mind as usal is wandering in some open space :P. I can so relate to this haiku.

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    1. Oh yes, it is only when we are sit down to study for the exam that the mind becomes hyper alert to everything else around us except the book we are supposed to read :P Happy to see you enjoyed your visit to my blog :)

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  11. Yes. riding against time is the fact.A good thought.

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