Open road beckons,
summer breeze caresses face,
open top driving.
summer breeze caresses face,
open top driving.
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Racing against time,
case of so near yet so far;
open book exams.
case of so near yet so far;
open book exams.
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This post is shared with Haikuhorizons and this week's prompt is OPEN
Luv the carefree mood of the first one. Tthanks for stopping at my blog
ReplyDeleteMuch love...
Glad you enjoyed my take Gillena, thank you for dropping by :)
DeleteOpen Top Driving in this summer. Ahh. Heavan.
ReplyDeleteSo true Rajan :) In California, it is almost year round blessing, isn't it?
Deletelovely haiku! especially loved the second one!...can totally relate to it :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Apurva, if exams were scary then open book exams were nightmares :D
DeleteI like these so much; fun and carefree and the second one took me down memory lane.
ReplyDeleteHappy to hear you enjoyed my Haiku ride Celestine :)
DeleteI love both of your haiku! The first for the exhilaration you captured and the second for the frantic edge. Well done! ♥
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind encouragement Kathy :)
Deleteopen top driving ! thats a nostalgic feeling to me ! you have painted a fantastic picture Reshma !
ReplyDeleteThank you Milan, glad you liked my take :)
DeleteMemories of college - so sweet! Loving these haiku. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words :)
DeleteA really nice take :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ankita :)
DeleteLoved it! There's truth in your Haiku, Reshma. Beautifully written! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words Balqis :)
DeleteOpen book exams ... seems simple but always a challenge :p
ReplyDeleteYou are so right Amrit, am so glad I dont have to face any more of them :)
DeleteLovely haiku Well done :))
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Thank you Sanjayji :)
Deletenicely done haiku.
ReplyDeleteI always struggle to attract myself to book when time presses for exam and mind as usal is wandering in some open space :P. I can so relate to this haiku.
Oh yes, it is only when we are sit down to study for the exam that the mind becomes hyper alert to everything else around us except the book we are supposed to read :P Happy to see you enjoyed your visit to my blog :)
DeleteYes. riding against time is the fact.A good thought.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sarala.
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