Wednesday, June 25, 2014

Comfort


Stone soup served with love,
comfort food for hungry soul,
outdoes lavish spread.
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Broken heart, bruised knee,
mother's touch is panacea,
her voice, an elixir.
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This post is shared with Haikuhorizons and this week's prompt is COMFORT




32 comments:

  1. I love the first one in particular because it is so ryhthmic and beautiful. It sounds great out loud. I like the content of the second one- so true, makes me think of my mom as a mom at her best.

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    1. Thank you for the kind words Rabbi, am pleased you enjoyed my take :)

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  2. Both are very good.I can relate with the second one. Well done Reshma.

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  3. Both are very comforting. Very nice.

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  4. i posted a comment too some time back???

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    1. You did? Maybe some issue with blogger, sorry about that Ankita.

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  5. I just loved these Haiku and mother's love has something special in it :)

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    1. Yes Ankita, Mother's love is magical :)

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    1. Glad you liked my take Celestine :)

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    1. Thank you for the kind words Chowlaji :)

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  8. Both exhibit comfort and are great. I simply can't choose a favorite because I like them both! ♥ Brilliant job.

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    1. Thanks Kathy, am happy you enjoyed my take :)

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  9. Ah! Stone Soup! I remember reading about Stone Soup in a children's book when I was a kid. A sweet memory -- thank you for jogging that memory!

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    1. Thank you Jen, the same story inspired the Haiku :)

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  10. wow ! the first one is too good ! reminds me of ''the good samaritan '' in our textbook when we were children !

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    1. Thank you for your kind words Milan. Yes, the moral science stories were really good.

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  11. awesome!!! loved both! and mother's love... hats off!! :)

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    1. Thank you so much for your encouragement Anjali :)

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  12. Both the ones say something meaningful.

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  13. 2 weeks maam????!!!!! Waiting for your posts..... busyaaaa????

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    1. Yes, summer activities have been keeping me busy and then felt lazy... needed a kick start to start posting again, thank you Rahmath :)

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