Tuesday, December 17, 2013

Dew


Sky blushes at dawn,
world wakens to new promise,
bejeweled grass gleams.

Bejeweled grass gleams,
lush green carpet beckons soles,
soul stirring sojourn.


This post is shared with Haikuheights and the prompt is DEW


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37 comments:

  1. SGDecember 17, 2013 at 5:26 PM

    Beautiful. A quote from Rabindranath Tagore comes to my mind:

    “Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf.”

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    1. ReshmaDecember 18, 2013 at 2:11 PM

      That is a lovely quote SG. time is like dew, beautiful while it lasts :)

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  2. cherylDecember 17, 2013 at 6:01 PM

    How delightful is this !

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  3. PealogicDecember 17, 2013 at 10:26 PM

    Wonderful play on words.

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  4. LocomenteDecember 17, 2013 at 11:14 PM

    Lovely...
    Enjoyed the read!

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  5. UnknownDecember 18, 2013 at 12:16 AM

    Very befitting take on the prompt. Loved reading.

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    1. ReshmaDecember 18, 2013 at 2:14 PM

      Thank you for your kind encouragement Ushaji :)

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  6. Sumana RoyDecember 18, 2013 at 4:28 AM

    a delightful read ....words breathe freshness...beautiful

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  7. AnonymousDecember 18, 2013 at 8:32 AM

    Ow beautiful, Reshma!

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  8. AnonymousDecember 18, 2013 at 10:07 AM

    Very nice set! I enjoyed both.

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    1. ReshmaDecember 18, 2013 at 2:32 PM

      Thank you very much, glad you liked my take on this delightful prompt:)

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  9. AnonymousDecember 18, 2013 at 1:11 PM

    Lovely bejeweled grass.

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    1. ReshmaDecember 18, 2013 at 2:33 PM

      We women love our jewelry and seem to see it everywhere :P

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  10. The Write GirlDecember 18, 2013 at 6:13 PM

    Beautiful haiku. I love this line most "soul stirring sojourn." Stunning!

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    1. ReshmaDecember 19, 2013 at 11:56 AM

      Thank you, a walk on the fresh grass rejuvenates our tired minds.

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  11. Amrit SinhaDecember 18, 2013 at 8:47 PM

    Dew is perhaps one of the greatest beauties of nature .... loved it :-)

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    1. ReshmaDecember 19, 2013 at 11:58 AM

      Yes Amrit, nature has a treasure trove of beauties :)

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  12. Rama AnanthDecember 18, 2013 at 9:13 PM

    I had posted a comment here, maybe, I forgot to press the publish button.
    It is beautifully penned Reshma.

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    1. ReshmaDecember 19, 2013 at 11:59 AM

      Thank you so much Rama , very thoughtful of you to repost :) you must be enjoying many walks in your lovely garden

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  13. Angelika PoeDecember 18, 2013 at 10:50 PM

    I read a wonderful morning walk on the grass here with you, very nice...

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  14. rallentandaDecember 19, 2013 at 12:50 AM

    Beautiful peaceful tone.

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  15. Shilpa GargDecember 19, 2013 at 1:25 AM

    Simply beautiful. Creates such a soothing imagery :)

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    1. ReshmaDecember 19, 2013 at 12:02 PM

      Thanks Shilpa, morning dew refreshes like no other :)

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  16. ReshmaDecember 19, 2013 at 12:02 PM

    Thanks Sarala :)

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  17. CanaryDecember 20, 2013 at 3:16 AM

    well woven!

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  18. UnknownDecember 24, 2013 at 5:12 AM

    beautiful!!! amazingly done...both of them...couldn't stop reading them again and again

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    1. ReshmaDecember 24, 2013 at 12:47 PM

      Aww Apurva, your kind words flatter me :) Keep visiting :)

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  19. UnknownDecember 24, 2013 at 9:16 AM

    Simply lovely! ♥

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