Monday, November 11, 2013

Seventh heaven.


Striking the right chord,
seven notes blend seamlessly-
rhythm resonates.

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A vow for a step,
bond to last seven lifetimes-
forged by holy fire.

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Streaks of vivid hues,
bridge of dreams across skies
seven shades of hope

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This post is shared with Haikuheights and the prompt is SEVEN

22 comments:

  1. Love the last lines of all three - absolutely perfect.

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    1. Thank you for the kind words Judith :)

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  2. Very brilliantly written I loved the 'seven shades of hope'.

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  3. I liked the seven shades of hope too!

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    1. Thanks Shilpa, rainbows are so full of hopes and dreams.

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  4. Engaging visuals..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/11/seven-seas-haiku.html

    RS

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    1. Thank you for your encouraging words RS :)

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  5. oh brilliant Reshma !!! so well crafted....

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    1. Thanks Sumana, glad you liked my attempts.

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  6. I like "seven shades of hope". I also liked the reminder of the seven holy steps.

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    1. Thank you so much Alice, nice to see you back :)

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  7. Very well composed Reshma! The last one is my favourite!:)

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  8. Beautiful composition Reshma! It seems like entire celestial beauty has come down in form of words!

    www.numerounity.com

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    1. Your comment made my day Ekta :) Glad you liked my creations :)

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  9. A vow for a step: very beautifully said.

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    1. Thank you Rama, the prompt being seven I just had to write about the Hindu Marriage ceremony :)

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  10. I love each one of them although I think the first one is definitely my favorite. It just sparkles a tinge more. Beautifully done! ♥

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    1. Thanks Kathy, music always manages to get one's attention. Glad you liked my attempts :)

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  11. Loved the trio - music, marriage, rainbow - wow :-)

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