Monday, November 11, 2013

Seventh heaven.


Striking the right chord,
seven notes blend seamlessly-
rhythm resonates.

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A vow for a step,
bond to last seven lifetimes-
forged by holy fire.

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Streaks of vivid hues,
bridge of dreams across skies
seven shades of hope

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This post is shared with Haikuheights and the prompt is SEVEN
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22 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 11, 2013 at 6:56 PM

    Love the last lines of all three - absolutely perfect.

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  2. UnknownNovember 11, 2013 at 9:07 PM

    Very brilliantly written I loved the 'seven shades of hope'.

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  3. Shilpa GargNovember 12, 2013 at 12:28 AM

    I liked the seven shades of hope too!

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    1. ReshmaNovember 12, 2013 at 3:07 PM

      Thanks Shilpa, rainbows are so full of hopes and dreams.

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  4. Ramesh SoodNovember 12, 2013 at 1:04 AM

    Engaging visuals..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/11/seven-seas-haiku.html

    RS

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  5. Sumana RoyNovember 12, 2013 at 5:20 AM

    oh brilliant Reshma !!! so well crafted....

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  6. AnonymousNovember 12, 2013 at 9:14 AM

    I like "seven shades of hope". I also liked the reminder of the seven holy steps.

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    1. ReshmaNovember 12, 2013 at 3:08 PM

      Thank you so much Alice, nice to see you back :)

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  7. Tarang SinhaNovember 12, 2013 at 8:57 PM

    Very well composed Reshma! The last one is my favourite!:)

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  8. ekta khetanNovember 13, 2013 at 10:22 AM

    Beautiful composition Reshma! It seems like entire celestial beauty has come down in form of words!

    www.numerounity.com

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    1. ReshmaNovember 15, 2013 at 4:31 PM

      Your comment made my day Ekta :) Glad you liked my creations :)

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  9. Rama AnanthNovember 16, 2013 at 4:10 AM

    A vow for a step: very beautifully said.

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    1. ReshmaNovember 18, 2013 at 6:20 PM

      Thank you Rama, the prompt being seven I just had to write about the Hindu Marriage ceremony :)

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  10. UnknownNovember 18, 2013 at 11:16 AM

    I love each one of them although I think the first one is definitely my favorite. It just sparkles a tinge more. Beautifully done! ♥

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    1. ReshmaNovember 18, 2013 at 6:22 PM

      Thanks Kathy, music always manages to get one's attention. Glad you liked my attempts :)

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  11. Amrit SinhaNovember 18, 2013 at 11:42 PM

    Loved the trio - music, marriage, rainbow - wow :-)

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