Saturday, October 26, 2013

Rummage



Thirsty mind wanders,
seeking love, life, truth, unknown-
needle in haystack.

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Wistful eyes, warm heart,
rummaging through life's pages-
time seems to stand still.

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This post is shared with Haikuheights and the prompt is RUMMAGE

32 comments:

  1. I like both ... the needle in haystack for # 1 and rummaging through life's pages-#2.
    Thank you very much,
    Peace
    Siggi

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  2. Rummaging through life's pages could be both joyful and sad!

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    1. Oh yes, nostalgia is always high on emotions.

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  3. very poignant and stirring. Lovely!

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  4. It's difficult but 'thirsty mind' does find that needle in haystack..............beautiful imagery in both haiku Reshma :)

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    1. The mind knows how to get its way, so it never gives up, thank you for your kind words Sumana:)

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  5. Reshma awesome Haiku. Imagery is perfect. Loved it!

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  6. Nice set! I especially liked rummaging through life's pages - it does make time freeze!

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    1. Thank you "one of a class" :) Memories do have special powers :)

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  7. Both haiku are lovely. Thirsty mind keeps wandering, may be if it stands still, it can find all that it looks for... :)

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    1. Thank you so much Shilpa, if only the mind realises when to stop wandering, it will surely find what it is searching for...

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  8. Both are beautiful and cannot choose the better one.Times does stand still when we think of old memories. and at times emotion are difficult to find just as a needle in a haystack.

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    1. Your comment made my day Kalpana :)

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  9. loved both... rummage through life's pages... awesome dear!

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  10. Both are simply beautiful... loved the imagery you created especially, needle in haystack!

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  11. Both stories are depicted wonderfully :D

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  12. Beautiful imagery Reshma. Mine is at http://geetaavij.wordpress.com/2013/10/28/different-types-different-styles

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    1. Thank you for dropping by Geeta :)

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  13. Loved the imagery you created in both! ♥

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  14. OK... 2nd one is my favorite...
    Though both are lovely!!!

    Plz follow the link for mine:
    http://locomente.blogspot.com/2013/10/alcoholic.html

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  15. Perfect description for the quest for knowledge!

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    1. Thank you for your kind words Kendall, welcome to my blog :)

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  16. True, they are needles in haystack.
    Lovely words ad beautifully woven together.

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