Thirsty mind wanders,
seeking love, life, truth, unknown-
needle in haystack.
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Wistful eyes, warm heart,
rummaging through life's pages-
time seems to stand still.
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This post is shared with Haikuheights and the prompt is RUMMAGE
I like both ... the needle in haystack for # 1 and rummaging through life's pages-#2.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much,
Peace
Siggi
Glad you like them Siggi :)
DeleteRummaging through life's pages could be both joyful and sad!
ReplyDeleteOh yes, nostalgia is always high on emotions.
Deletevery poignant and stirring. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteIt's difficult but 'thirsty mind' does find that needle in haystack..............beautiful imagery in both haiku Reshma :)
ReplyDeleteThe mind knows how to get its way, so it never gives up, thank you for your kind words Sumana:)
DeleteReshma awesome Haiku. Imagery is perfect. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteNice set! I especially liked rummaging through life's pages - it does make time freeze!
ReplyDeleteThank you "one of a class" :) Memories do have special powers :)
DeleteBoth haiku are lovely. Thirsty mind keeps wandering, may be if it stands still, it can find all that it looks for... :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Shilpa, if only the mind realises when to stop wandering, it will surely find what it is searching for...
DeleteBoth are beautiful and cannot choose the better one.Times does stand still when we think of old memories. and at times emotion are difficult to find just as a needle in a haystack.
ReplyDeleteYour comment made my day Kalpana :)
Deleteloved both... rummage through life's pages... awesome dear!
ReplyDeleteThanks Anjali :)
DeleteBoth are simply beautiful... loved the imagery you created especially, needle in haystack!
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it Shilpa :)
DeleteBoth stories are depicted wonderfully :D
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DeleteBeautiful imagery Reshma. Mine is at http://geetaavij.wordpress.com/2013/10/28/different-types-different-styles
ReplyDeleteThank you for dropping by Geeta :)
DeleteLoved the imagery you created in both! ♥
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathy :)
DeleteOK... 2nd one is my favorite...
ReplyDeleteThough both are lovely!!!
Plz follow the link for mine:
http://locomente.blogspot.com/2013/10/alcoholic.html
Glad you liked my take Satya :)
DeletePerfect description for the quest for knowledge!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words Kendall, welcome to my blog :)
DeleteTrue, they are needles in haystack.
ReplyDeleteLovely words ad beautifully woven together.
Glad you liked my take Rama :)
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