Friday, May 17, 2013

Ball of life


White, brown and golden
huddle up, future unknown-
new life in a shell.


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Painted balls of fun,
seek the joy that is hidden-
treasure hunt is on.


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This post is shared with Haikuheights and the prompt is EGG

Pictures are from Google images

24 comments:

  1. In the first haiku, love the idea of eggs huddling. In the second haiku, love the idea of transformed eggs!

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    1. Thanks Gemma :) There's comfort in a huddle and joy in the transformation.

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  2. I love the first haiku with the eggs huddling and new life in a shell.
    The second one, the treasure hunt.
    Peace
    Siggi

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    1. I'm glad you enjoyed this visit, keep visiting Siggi :)

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  3. Very creative haiku, loved both..
    In the first one idea of unknown future and in second one idea of hidden joy! So true! :)

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    1. Yes Kislaya, there's so much to look forward to in life :)

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  4. A beautiful haiku duo ... uncertainty of life to the pleasure of unraveling mysteries ... wonderfully written !!!

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    1. Loved the way you summed up, thanks GS:)

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  5. Beautiful indeed!! Both of them are harbingers of joy; the first one brings life and the second one treasures of life.

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    1. Thanks ma'am:) I just wanted to capture the excitement of life...

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  6. Nicely done. Eggs will keep your life enriched:) Tigerbrite

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    1. Thank you, after all they hold the future :)

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  7. you made being an egg both worrisome and fun,...

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    1. Isn't that life Joanne? Thank you for dropping by :)

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  8. Oh these are great, Reshma. Lovely treasure hunt

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